When I was at the start line my heart was pounding waiting for Mr Burt's clappers to bang. Then we were powering ahead with a burst of speed. When I was running my legs were getting weaker. When I got past the gate then it was muddy so because my legs were stuck inside it took a long time to get it out. Finally I got to the toilets at the reserve. I stopped and had a rest for two minutes then started to run again. When I got to the last gate I busted my hardest to came 3rd but I just came 4th place .But I was still so happy that I bet my place last year.
Great work Ilalio. I like some of the vocab you have used to describe the race.
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Hey Ilalio. You have a very good story I like the bit when you said"When I got to the last gate I busted my hardest to came 3rd but I just came 4th place" Anyway keep up the good work and go hard.
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